submits the articie, she would like you to read it and think about how it should be revised. When you finish reading, answer the guestions that follow. Logging off (1) When I was born the internet was Just going widespread home use (2) By the time I was in elementary school, the soclal medila craze wes really taking off. (3)By middle school,we all hed our own soclal media accounts.(4) Every night we were sending messages on our computers or we were on our parents' computers, sending messages on our multiple accounts because one account just wasn't enough. (5) Now in high school, we are logged in on our cell phones. (6)Every doy. (7) All day. (8) What was life like before constant social media updates? (9) This year,I decided to set out to try to live a week without using my cell phone ar home computer for any soclal media or texting. (10) I felt the first pang to connect within the first few minutes of waking up. (11) I usually reach for my phone to check sites for messages or pasts that may have come in overnight. (12) 1 had to stop Sentence alincludes some redundant information. How should sentence 4 be corrected to improve the redundandes? Every night we were sending mestages on our A computers of we were sending them on our porents computers, sending messages on our multiple accounts because one account Just wosn't enough Every night were sending messages on our B sending messages on multiple accounts computers or we were on our parents' computers, one account just wasn't enough. Every night we were either an our computers or our C parents' computers, sending messages on multipler accounts because one Just wasn't enough. Every night we were sending messages on our D on our multiple accounts because sending them on computers or we were on our parents' computers. one wasn't enough.

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submits the articie, she would like you to read it and think about how it should be revised. When you finish reading, answer the guestions that follow. Logging off (1) When I was born the internet was Just going widespread home use (2) By the time I was in elementary school, the soclal medila craze wes really taking off. (3)By middle school,we all hed our own soclal media accounts.(4) Every night we were sending messages on our computers or we were on our parents' computers, sending messages on our multiple accounts because one account just wasn't enough. (5) Now in high school, we are logged in on our cell phones. (6)Every doy. (7) All day. (8) What was life like before constant social media updates? (9) This year,I decided to set out to try to live a week without using my cell phone ar home computer for any soclal media or texting. (10) I felt the first pang to connect within the first few minutes of waking up. (11) I usually reach for my phone to check sites for messages or pasts that may have come in overnight. (12) 1 had to stop Sentence alincludes some redundant information. How should sentence 4 be corrected to improve the redundandes? Every night we were sending mestages on our A computers of we were sending them on our porents computers, sending messages on our multiple accounts because one account Just wosn't enough Every night were sending messages on our B sending messages on multiple accounts computers or we were on our parents' computers, one account just wasn't enough. Every night we were either an our computers or our C parents' computers, sending messages on multipler accounts because one Just wasn't enough. Every night we were sending messages on our D on our multiple accounts because sending them on computers or we were on our parents' computers. one wasn't enough.

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## Step 1The problem is asking us to identify the sentence that best corrects the redundancy in sentence 4. Redundancy in language refers to the use of words or phrases that are unnecessary because they repeat the same idea.## Step 2Looking at the options, we need to find the sentence that eliminates the redundancy while maintaining the original meaning.## Step 3Option A: "Every night we were sending messages on our computers or we were sending them on our parents' computers, sending messages on our multiple accounts because one account just wasn't enough." This sentence still contains redundancy as it repeats the idea of sending messages on multiple accounts.## Step 4Option B: "Every night we were sending messages on our computers or we were on our parents' computers, one account just wasn't enough." This sentence eliminates the redundancy by removing the phrase "sending messages on our multiple accounts".## Step 5Option C: "Every night we were either on our computers or our parents' computers, sending messages on multiple accounts because one just wasn't enough." This sentence still contains redundancy as it repeats the idea of sending messages on multiple accounts.## Step 6Option D: "Every night we were sending messages on our computers or we were on our parents' computers, one wasn't enough." This sentence still contains redundancy as it repeats the idea of sending messages on multiple accounts.## Step 7Based on the analysis, option B is the sentence that best corrects the redundancy in sentence 4.

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