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Rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. Do not change the sentence's meaning. Your answer Athletes who are in high school should not be allowed to commit to colleges until their senior year .

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Rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. Do not change the
sentence's meaning.
Your answer
Athletes who are in high school should
not be allowed to commit to colleges
until their senior year .

Rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. Do not change the sentence's meaning. Your answer Athletes who are in high school should not be allowed to commit to colleges until their senior year .

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Emiliaélite · Tutor durante 8 años
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'Athletes should not be allowed to commit to colleges until their senior year.'

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## Step 1<br />The original sentence is "Athletes who are in high school should not be allowed to commit to colleges until their senior year."<br />## Step 2<br />The wordy section in this sentence is "who are in high school". This phrase is unnecessary because the context already implies that the athletes are in high school.<br />## Step 3<br />By removing the wordy phrase, the sentence becomes more concise without changing its meaning.
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