Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her ideas and development? The Servicemen's Readjustment Act, also known as the G.I.Bill, gave veterans money to pay college costs and buy books and supplies. Ex -servicemen were also eligible to receive low-interest home loans so that they could afford to buy their own homes, as well as commercial loans to set up their own businesses One of the more controversial aspects of the bill was the provision of unemployment benefits to the veterans who were unable to find jobs. by removing a second main idea by stating the main idea clearly